Hi you
I like your homework. Good quality lines and they are confident. I just would like to point to your last paper, the boxes. The perspektive is fine, but for the futur try to be more precise in the corners of the boxes.
May you continue with your quality. Good work
Hello hello,
cute animals.
i would recommend you to do this lesson 5 again.
mark your lines with confidence but controlled, they seem to me as if you did them quick in order go get the homework done faster.
and a tipp. use your elipses as guidelines to doubbelchek the proportions.
try to find the "true" form under the fur or feathers. where are the joints, how bis the the muscle etc..
but its a very nice start.
Hello hello,
this is the best nr 5 homework i have seen so fare.
and for your head construcktions, those so so good, i cant give you tipps bejond that.
sorry, for critique and tipps you need someone else.
very well done.
(i am a little proud of you. )
hello hello,
your organic studys are not as good as your animals,
the animals are very good, but i would recommend you to use your elipse guidelines to doubblechek the proportions.
very good
hi hello, nice work.
i would recommend that you work on your soft lineflow. it feels very thick and heavy,
and i would say that you should work on your abilitys to draw what you see, not what you think you draw, like with the chicken, understand the body of the chicken, and when you quicky google "chicken skelett" or " anatomy"
but i like your confidence in your strokes.
good luck
Your Submission is good,
but i would recomend you to work on your lines a little more, they are a little wonky here and thre, and you animals are sometimes very detailed without having a nice solid foundation. Work on the konstuction first, than on the textures and details. Practice them seperate in your fun times. but overall, you did very good
Your anmals look 3D and solid, i have the feeling that faces are one thing you are unsure about.
Your shadows in the second ogsnic study are better in shape explaining than the first, but both are good.
I realy very love your organic interactions, the forms and the shadows are very nice. And your animals look good too.
Some are better, but overall they look very 3D and solid.
Well done
I like your animals, the pigeon the most. i like your strokes, and the forms and the animals are beautiful hughe on the paper.
Where the rest of my recommendations tend to be for specific products, this one is a little more general. It's about printer paper.
As discussed in Lesson 0, printer paper (A4 or 8.5"x11") is what we recommend. It's well suited to the kind of tools we're using, and the nature of the work we're doing (in terms of size). But a lot of students still feel driven to sketchbooks, either by a desire to feel more like an artist, or to be able to compile their work as they go through the course.
Neither is a good enough reason to use something that is going to more expensive, more complex in terms of finding the right kind for the tools we're using, more stress-inducing (in terms of not wanting to "ruin" a sketchbook - we make a lot of mistakes throughout the work in this course), and more likely to keep you from developing the habits we try to instill in our students (like rotating the page to find a comfortable angle of approach).
Whether you grab the ream of printer paper linked here, a different brand, or pick one up from a store near you - do yourself a favour and don't make things even more difficult for you. And if you want to compile your work, you can always keep it in a folder, and even have it bound into a book when you're done.
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