Hi Tofu,

Thanks a lot for the critique, I felt like it helped me a lot. Sorry for replying a bit late, I've tried to put more time into rereading and completing the exercises which you told me to redo this time around. I still struggle with them but I hope I made at least a bit of progress.

link: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Vvr2TTX7SaVzDYMGcLQ4pLHokSGkYbae?usp=sharing