Hi, thank you very much for taking time for such a detailed and thorough critique. You nailed it on many issues. Some of these I noticed myself while doing the exercises and others I will work on.

I had a few questions regarding line quality. First of all, I found that I wobbled a lot if I watched the entire line as I tended to subconciously correct. I had the straightest lines when I look at where my lines are ending up and just "trust" that I will take a straight path to get there. Is this a good approach?

Secondly, I have the hardest time for some reason with short lines. It is tough to engage the whole arm on these and they continue to be a problem. Do you have any suggestions for these, or just more practice?

Thank you again for all the help and I am working on the 250 box challenge.