3:16 AM, Thursday March 20th 2025
Hello GPPWALTON
I can see that you put in a lot of effort and thank you for taking the time to uplaod and do the exercises
I AM NEW TO DRAWABOX (But i will try to give my best feedback, I am an intermediate artist)
1st exercise (lines) - Some of the lines stop in the middel of the line drawn with the ruler, try to draw the lines to the end even if it feels wrong. This might help build confidens. It might be helpfull to retry this exercise using the gosting method.
There is also a lack of confidence so you might find the ghosting method helpfull. You improved A LOT from the first page to the second page.
2nd exercise - Your lines look a lot more accurate and confident using the ghosting method. You did really well with this exercise. Some of the lines look a bit wobbly so make sure you do NOT draw them very slowly and try to get them more accurate. Instead try to focus more on the flow of your arm
Planes - This is also done very well, I would give the same feedback than the previous exercise.
elipses page exercises - This is the exercise that i would suggest you focus on the most
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Make sure when drawing elipses that you go over it two times as show in the draw a box video
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Some of the elipses are floating, by that I mean that they do not touch any sides of the box or other elipses
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Make sure not to squish your elipses, if you do not have enough space move on
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Make sure that your elipses are not wobbly or misshapen
I have the same critique for the funnel exercise
I hope this helped, try not to get too frustrated i know its hard;_;
Next Steps:
IMPORTANT- Keep practicing all the elipses excercises
But over all i think you did very well (^?^)








