12:35 AM, Wednesday October 25th 2023
Hey GPPWALTON!
Thanks for taking the time to post your work!
I've just begun to do the same and it's really helpful to see how others are tackling the homework.
The first few things that jump out at me is that your follow through with your lines seems perfect! Even if the accuracy is off, I don't see any chicken scratching, which means you're committing to your lines which is perfect.
Speaking on your accuracy, it's clear that you just need to practice more ghosted lines. Maybe you could do more pages of those for warm-ups? Just to work on your accuracy.
Your ellipses and circles seem to be coming along too but your accuracy could use some sharpening up here as well.
Don't forget to circle your pen around your ellipse for 2-3 full rotations before lifting the pen. It will help dial in your accuracy.
By posting your work and recognizing you need to work on your fundamentals I have no doubt you'll see improvements in no time!
Thanks again for posting!








