8:52 PM, Tuesday October 12th 2021
thank you !
thank you !
sorry not sure how to delete a homework submission upload. I had some NSFW selfies on the bottom and needed to delete the link and reupload. Here it is but its quite bad with minor improvment https://imgur.com/a/mjWPxc5
Hi this is my first official review after reading the discord critque rules.
Your lines look confident when superimposed and slightly woobly in line ghosting method. i think you may be drawing with your wrist some and it contorts the line at the end. Practice working from the shoulder and elbow.
Ellipses look good but when tilted at a 45 degree angle make sure the ellipses are touching each other like how you did with your funnel ellipses coming out of the corner.
Plotted perspective looks really good. In rough perspective i think you may have saw the x shape of the converging lines. The 250 box challenge should help. The rotated boxes looked really good and thoughtout. And the organic perspective looks good but i think you could have done a few more medium boxes and small boxes to.
Looks well done. Next is 250 box challenge!
I was also having problems with organic perspective but noticed only sides are showing for each box. Sorry if my help is unhelpful the link is broken so i couldnt see much. I just finished/submitted the HW for lesson 1 like 15minutes before you. Please critic me if possible. Thanks !
this is great only on lesson one but your lines are confident and its good shading.