Scyfris

Thanks, Uncomfortable, for the detailed and thoughtful critique!

Thanks Uncomfortable for your feedback and your time. I'll take what you said to heart and slow down a bit next time.

Hi Uncomfortable, thanks so much for the detailed and thoughtful critique! Everything you said makes sense to me.

I have revised leaf exercise here: https://imgur.com/a/8dXm14l

I included a page of leaf, and I drew them larger this time to give myself some room, so there are less leaves but I tried to focus on the edge details. I redid the potato plant as well focusing on not skipping the framework step.

I also have included an extra leaf I was struggling with (maple leaf), focusing on edge detail and overlapping subforms. The maple leaf has now become my arch-nemesis >_< .

I'll continue to work on improving on the aspects you left me feedback on.

Thanks again, have a good day!

This one is really nice! How long did it take you ? great work!

Love the shading and line art style!

Hi Tofu,

Thanks so much for the feedback! I'll keep working on these exercises as I move on and will work on improving with respect to your critique points.

Thanks again! Have a great day

Hi Tofu!

I was going back through my lessons and I realize I may have never replied to your critique. Thanks so much for the thoughtful answers and I am continuing to practice all line convergence rather than in pairs. I appreciate it alot, thank you!

Hello Rob, thank you so much for reviewing and the helpful feedback and answer to my questions! It's great to see where I can improve on these (especially rotated box, I wouldn't have realized that issue). Appreciate all your help, I will continue with 250 box and continue practicing the ellipses and other exercises (especially the rough perspective to get those boxes better aligned).

Thank you! Have a great day