Saimoning

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    4:43 PM, Friday February 2nd 2024

    Hello I'll be covering your lesson 1

    Superimposed lines: A few having fraying at both ends, but most don't show this. Good work.

    Ghosted Lines: Solid straight lines that all meet their matching ends. Well done.

    Ghosted Planes: These appear to be solid. Well done.

    Table of Elipses: Good attempt keeing everything tight. But a number are breaking out of bounds.

    Elipses in a Plane: Still quiet a few brekaing out of boundries. But you do seem to understand the direcitons.

    Funnels: A lot better with keeping things in boundries.

    Plotted Perspective: Overall no issues here.

    Rough Perspective: This one is tricky. I think you do undrestand the concept.

    Rotated Boxes: This one is tricky, this looks less like a sphere. But I do think you understand.

    Organic Perspective: Solid word. Overall all box rotate

    Next Steps:

    I would suggest when warming up make sure to practice ghosting and practice rotating some box. Good luck I wish you the best

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    4:35 PM, Friday February 2nd 2024

    Hello I'll be covering your lesson 1

    Superimposed lines: A few having fraying at both ends, but most don't show this. Good work.

    Ghosted Lines: Solid straight lines that all meet their matching ends. Well done.

    Ghosted Planes: These appear to be solid. Well done.

    Table of Elipses: Solid work

    Elipses in a Plane: Still quiet a few brekaing out of boundries. But you do seem to understand the direcitons.

    Funnels: A lot better with keeping things in boundries.

    Plotted Perspective: Overall no issues here.

    Rough Perspective: This one is tricky. I think you do undrestand the concept.

    Rotated Boxes: This one is tricky, this looks less like a sphere. But I do think you understand.

    Organic Perspective: Solid work.

    Next Steps:

    My suggestion is to practice ghosting lines and your rotation of box before going to lesson 1.

    This community member feels the lesson should be marked as complete, and 2 others agree. The student has earned their completion badge for this lesson and should feel confident in moving onto the next lesson.
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    4:30 PM, Friday February 2nd 2024

    Hello I'll be covering your lesson 1

    Superimposed lines: A few having fraying at both Its very solid.

    Ghosted Lines: Solid lines and nice job

    Ghosted Planes: These appear to be solid. Well done.

    Table of Elipses: Some breaking out of bounds overall nice job

    Elipses in a Plane: Still quiet a few brekaing out of boundries. But you do seem to understand the direcitons.

    Funnels: A lot better with keeping things in boundries.

    Plotted Perspective: Overall no issues here.

    Rough Perspective: I think you do undrestand the concept but overall nice job

    Rotated Boxes: This one is tricky, this looks less like a sphere. But I do think you understand.

    Organic Perspective: Some box are not rotating over all Solid work.

    Next Steps:

    I would suggest when warming up make sure to practice ghosting and reading on different angles for sphere

    This community member feels the lesson should be marked as complete, and 2 others agree. The student has earned their completion badge for this lesson and should feel confident in moving onto the next lesson.
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    4:27 PM, Friday February 2nd 2024

    Hello I'll be covering your lesson 1

    Superimposed lines: A few having fraying at both ends and arching lines overall nice job.

    Ghosted Lines: Theirs some are not plotted well but over all nice job

    Ghosted Planes: These appear to be solid. Well done.

    Table of Elipses: Some breaking out of bounds overall nice job

    Elipses in a Plane: Still quiet a few brekaing out of boundries. But you do seem to understand the direcitons.

    Funnels: A lot better with keeping things in boundries.

    Plotted Perspective: Overall no issues here.

    Rough Perspective: This one is tricky. I think you do undrestand the concept.

    Rotated Boxes: This one is tricky, this looks less like a sphere. But I do think you understand.

    Organic Perspective: Some box are not rotating over all Solid work.

    Next Steps:

    Before you move onto 250 boxes, I would suggest when warming up make sure to practice ghosting and reading on different angles for sphere.

    This community member feels the lesson should be marked as complete, and 2 others agree. The student has earned their completion badge for this lesson and should feel confident in moving onto the next lesson.
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    4:19 PM, Friday February 2nd 2024

    Hello I'll be covering your lesson 1 submission

    Superimposed lines: Thiers A few having fraying at both ends and arching overall nice job

    Ghosted Lines: Solid straight lines

    Ghosted Planes: MISSING

    Table of Elipses: Good attempt keeing everything tight. But a number are breaking out of bounds.

    Elipses in a Plane: Still quiet a few brekaing out of boundries. But you do seem to understand the direcitons.

    Funnels: A lot better with keeping things in boundries

    Plotted Perspective: Overall no issues here.

    Rough Perspective: This one is tricky. I think you do undrestand the concept.

    Rotated Boxes: This one is tricky, this looks less like a sphere. But I do think you understand.

    Organic Perspective: Solid work.

    Next Steps:

    Before you move onto 250 boxes, I would suggest when warming up make sure to practice ghosting. Good luck soldier

    This community member feels the lesson should be marked as complete, and 2 others agree. The student has earned their completion badge for this lesson and should feel confident in moving onto the next lesson.
    4:15 PM, Friday February 2nd 2024

    Hello I'll be covering your lesson 1 submission

    Superimposed lines: Thiers A few having fraying at both ends and arching overall nice job

    Ghosted Lines: Solid straight lines

    Ghosted Planes: MISSING

    Table of Elipses: Good attempt keeing everything tight. But a number are breaking out of bounds.

    Elipses in a Plane: Still quiet a few brekaing out of boundries. But you do seem to understand the direcitons.

    Funnels: A lot better with keeping things in boundries

    Plotted Perspective: Overall no issues here.

    Rough Perspective: This one is tricky. I think you do undrestand the concept.

    Rotated Boxes: This one is tricky, this looks less like a sphere. But I do think you understand.

    Organic Perspective: Solid work.

    2 users agree
    4:12 PM, Friday February 2nd 2024

    Hello I'll be covering your lesson 1 submission

    Superimposed lines: Thiers A few having fraying at both ends and arching overall nice job

    Ghosted Lines: Solid straight lines

    Ghosted Planes: MISSING

    Table of Elipses: Good attempt keeing everything tight. But a number are breaking out of bounds.

    Elipses in a Plane: Still quiet a few brekaing out of boundries. But you do seem to understand the direcitons.

    Funnels: A lot better with keeping things in boundries

    Plotted Perspective: Overall no issues here.

    Rough Perspective: This one is tricky. I think you do undrestand the concept.

    Rotated Boxes: This one is tricky, this looks less like a sphere. But I do think you understand.

    Organic Perspective: Solid work.

    1 users agree
    3:53 PM, Friday February 2nd 2024

    Hello I'll be covering your lesson 1 submission

    Superimposed lines: A few having fraying at both ends, but most don't show this. Nice Job

    Ghosted Lines: Solid straight lines

    Ghosted Planes: These appear to be solid. Well done.

    Table of Elipses: Good attempt keeing everything tight. But a number are breaking out of bounds.

    Elipses in a Plane: Still quiet a few brekaing out of boundries. But you do seem to understand the direcitons.

    Funnels: A lot better with keeping things in boundries.

    Plotted Perspective: Overall no issues here.

    Rough Perspective: This one is tricky. I think you do undrestand the concept.

    Rotated Boxes: This one is tricky, this looks less like a sphere. But I do think you understand.

    Organic Perspective: Solid work.

    7:31 PM, Friday July 28th 2023

    thank you

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