RythmRune

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    6:56 AM, Saturday February 22nd 2020

    Hello:

    Thanks for your detailed and careful critique.

    It is no need to rush to next lesson,

    so I did one more page of the dramatized boxes (I suppose you mean foreshortening boxes). https://imgur.com/gallery/PCqSJm2

    Hope this looks fine.

    11:11 AM, Saturday February 15th 2020

    First of all, thanks for your detailed critique.

    Actually, I had a quite tough time when I worked on organic perspective.

    I wasn't really sure about how to draw it. I was wondering whether it is fine by just rotated the boxes along the line? And as the result, there are too many boxes, crowded, and perspective is not obvious.

    This time based on the critique, I try to focus a little bit more on perspective.

    Since this homework named organic perspective, I reckon that perspective should be important, too.

    One more change is I try to reduce number of boxes to make the results less crowded.

    I hope this would look better now.

    Here is my work: https://imgur.com/gallery/00qIKDC

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