Pongo

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pongo's Sketchbook

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    1:00 AM, Monday February 7th 2022

    Hi there! This is looking good! One thing that stood out to me when looking at your work were the elipses, specifically in the ghost planes. I would say if you can try to keep the numbers of draw-through's of the elipses to only two times. Just so it can still have a better structure without looking to scratchy. One other thing that stood out to me were the lines of the planes themselves they seem to wobble just a tad so keep an eye out for that in the future. Well done!

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    9:20 PM, Saturday February 5th 2022

    Hello there! Your excersises look great! The one thing i did notice a lot throughout your work are the wobbly lines. I would say make sure youre ghosting and using your shoulder when creating those marks so that they come out confident and strong. I noticed it the most in your ghosted planes exercise. So just work on that ans that should definitley elevate your work!

    Next Steps:

    Try doing some more ghosted lines, possibly go over the ghosted planes exercise again.

    When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
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Neither is a good enough reason to use something that is going to more expensive, more complex in terms of finding the right kind for the tools we're using, more stress-inducing (in terms of not wanting to "ruin" a sketchbook - we make a lot of mistakes throughout the work in this course), and more likely to keep you from developing the habits we try to instill in our students (like rotating the page to find a comfortable angle of approach).

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