10:13 PM, Saturday July 29th 2023
Hello there!
I will be providing critique to your homework!
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Superimposed lines - generally well done, you don't have much fraying on the start of the lines, they are mostly confident and quite accurate (slightly less so on longest lines, but that's to be expected).
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Ghosted lines - as above, pretty confident lines. Though gotta note that sometimes you miss the starting point, make sure to be mindful of it when starting a line.
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Ghosted planes - already can see the improvement with accuracy on the start of the lines, so great job on that! The second page of ghosted planes has a lot of repeating lines though - try to avoid them. No matter how inaccurate the initial line is, just keep it there and don't try to fix it with another one.
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Table of ellipses - good job on those! All of the ellipses are very confident and varying in degree. Not all are accurate, but again - very minor gripe for now.
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Ellipses in plane - as above, confident lines and not bad accuracy at all. A couple are a slight misshapen, so make sure you prioritize the shape over accuracy to the plane.
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Funnels - make sure the straight lines dividing the curves is directly between the curves, as it's meant to be the minor axis for the ellipses, use a ruler to measure if necessary. Most of the ellipses are well done, though some are a bit tilted off axis.
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Plotted perspective - some of the lines of the boxes that are behind are marked extremely lightly, or in some cases - not marked at all. Make sure to mark all lines for this exercise... Also, what are you hiding behind that scrap of paper on frame 3, hm?! All around - well done.
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Rough perspective - the boxes are generally well constructed, but I will bring up again that you use a lot of repeating lines, try to avoid them. Accuracy of the lines is pretty good, you have some curves in the lines, but nothing too major, well done!
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Rotated boxes - looks very good! I will bring up repeated lines again and when adding additional line weight, make sure to only do it with just one extra line, not multiple.
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Organic perspective - some of the boxes look really rushed, take your time with those exercises. This is also where the repeated lines and multiple lines for weight are most apparent. But boxes itself and nicely varied and increase in size well.
All in all, the biggest issue you seem to have is repeated lines and too many lines for adding weight, so be sure to work on that when you tackle the 250 Box Challenge!
Next Steps:
You are ready to move onto 250 Box Challenge!