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Photon_

Tamer of Beasts

The Indomitable (Spring 2022)

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  • The Indomitable (Spring 2022)
  • Sharing the Knowledge
  • Tamer of Beasts
  • Giver of Life
  • Dimensional Dominator
  • Basics Brawler
    7:29 AM, Sunday March 27th 2022

    Thank you!

    3:56 PM, Saturday November 27th 2021

    Thank you for the critique!

    5:12 PM, Wednesday November 3rd 2021

    Thanks for the critique!

    Regarding leaves - for some reason I find twisting leaves harder than arrows. I will try to keep your tips in mind when moving forward.

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    1:27 PM, Monday August 23rd 2021

    Hello,

    overall your work looks good, though in organic boxes you forgot to draw through your forms - this helps to understand 3D space better.

    good luck in 250 boxes challenge, it gets boring after a while so do remember the 50% drawing is fun part from Lesson 0

    Next Steps:

    250 Boxes Challenge

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    2:11 PM, Monday August 16th 2021

    Hello,

    good job completing the lesson! most exercises are done well, here's critique:

    • for Arrows I see a lot of chicken scratching (confidence >> accuracy in drawabox ), also there's not much of them you could have done more - I suggest doing some confident arrows

    • organic ellipses/curves - I see some lacking line confidence in some of them once again, also your sausage hardly rotate in 3d space - most ellipses/curves have same degree which while possible hardly happens in real life (look up some slinky photos), I suggest to try contours exercise with varying ellipses degrees

    Good luck in your art journey!

    Next Steps:

    focus more on exercises I mentioned in your warmups and move on to Lesson 3

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    12:23 PM, Friday August 13th 2021

    Thank you so much for such a comprehensive critique! I will keep your advice in mind while continueing my drawabox journey.

    12:04 PM, Friday August 13th 2021

    I think the best ones are these (just keep in mind to prioritize smooth lines over accuracy):

    • Ellipses in planes - you get to practice straight lines and ellipses, though lines are short

    • Ghosting long lines

    • Ghosting curves (place 3 points randomly, then try connecting them with a smooth curve in single motion)

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    11:25 AM, Tuesday August 10th 2021

    Hello,

    here's the critique:

    • Arrows: edges look a bit sketchy, make sure you use ghosting & confident lines when adding extra lineweight

    • Contour ellipses: you prioritize hitting edges instead of confident lines - getting confident ellipse in is more important (as accuracy will improve with practice)

    • Contour curves: mostly OK, just ends of some of them are sketchy

    • Textures: OK

    • Dissections: OK

    • Intersection: OK

    • Organic Intersection: mostly OK, though contours once again do not look confident

    I think you can move on to next lesson, though in your warm ups do keep in minds to focus on line confidence

    Good luck in your art journey!

    Next Steps:

    Lesson 3

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    2:18 PM, Thursday August 5th 2021

    Hello, sure more critiques are always welcome :)

    I do plan on continuing the course just taking a break from drawabox for a while (250 boxes and textures were quite tiring)

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    4:33 PM, Monday August 2nd 2021

    Hello,

    good job completing Lesson 2, all exercises look great though not much to say, the only mistake I see is in shading on intersections - when you shade round forms like sphere and cylinder with hatching lines that kinda flattens the form (i.e. spheres look cut off) - instead try hatching like exercise suggests.

    Good luck in your art journey!

    Next Steps:

    Lesson 3

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