OmarYaser

superimposed lines : i can't find a point that you are trying to hit, but you should. Try as possible to hit a single point with all 8 lines, that's the aim of the exercise to build your muscle memory.

ghosted lines & planes : missing the final point is okay at first, but gabs in the middle of your mark is a sign of hesitation which you don't want to have. Commit to your line once the pen hits the paper and after making a complete mark see where you need to improve.

Ellipses (all exercises) : they are good but try to not repeat more then 3 times.

plotted perspective : nothing to say

rough perspective : using the ghosting method will improve your work, definitely.

rotated boxes : your beginning looks very promising but not completing is a sin.

organic perspective : actually i liked it to the point of saying that it is far from lines exercises.

i really appreciate your critique.

i really miss accuracy with ellipses, working on it.

also, working on ghosting lines too.

thanks again

My fault!!!

lines

superimposed lines are good. ghosted lines you submitted only one page, one missing. ghosted planes are very neat with almost unnoticeable arching in some lines.

ellipses

tables of ellipses are good. ellipses in planes needs little improvement.the funnels exercise is not as good as the others.

boxes

there is some wobbling in the rough perspective exercise. rotated boxes are not rotated enough with a lot of asymmetry. other than that you are good.

other than some fraying on your superimposed lines your work is good.

Thank you for this effort.

first, you should add two more pages of ghosted planes. they are required to be separate from ellipses in planes exercise.

second, you left alot of space on your pages of superimposed lines and the boxes exercises. you should use space better.

finally, rotated boxes are completely out of sync. you should revisit the video of the exercise.

You did a good job overall, but you really missed something in the rotated boxes exercise. It doesn't look right at all, sorry you should rewatch the video and try again.

First, thank you for your time.

Second, i don't know if i can modify the original submission so in the new link i reuploaded the original uploads, added 2 pages of gosted planes, and one practice page of superimposed lines. http://imgur.com/a/w9XzO5R

I noticed two things:

1. in the superimposed lines exercise you tend to overshoot at the edge of the page, work on this.

2. rotated boxes need more work from your side.

Otherwise i liked how the rough perspective exercise turned out.