Mitsosdankhouse55

thank you very much!

hi there

i have finally finished the extra 30 boxes that you wanted

https://imgur.com/a/xiZGyxg

hit there thank you for taking the time to give me a critique

ima be honest i am struggling to understand what you mean about the vanishing point between the viewer and the box if you mean by having the (imaginary) horizon line in the middle of the box or something else?

also for the first 15 boxes you said you wanted me to show you the vanishing points and i have done a little test page to see if thats what you mean

https://imgur.com/a/XAmN2fB

againt thank you for the critique and ill come back for you with the rest of the work shortly

alright both look good

i'm going to mark this as complete so you can move to the 250 box challenge good luck!

and remember to plan your lines you are looking for smoothness not for accurarcy

great thank you very much!

Hi there thank you for the critique!

here are my revisions

https://imgur.com/a/pORTc4L

although one thing about the 250 box challenge is that i have already done it,

i've posted both lesson one and the 250 box challenge for the community feedback, (with the ok to move foward from lesson 1) the question is do i have to do them again?

Hello and welcome to drawabox, good work on completing lesson 1!

ill be critiquing your homework today

1: Lines

• you've done good work on the lines, i do see some wobbliness on the ghosted lines and ghosted planes exercise,

• these are not earth shattering but you do need to remember you are focusing on confident not accurate lines

2: Ellipses

• On the Ellipses i'd say they look pretty good! although i do see some wobbliness on tables of ellipses exercise bit thats pretty reasonable

• in the the ellipses in planes exercise though you line quality has seem to have suffered a bit, it is improtant to use the information that you got from the lines section and apply it to the other exercises

• I see you had some trouble with the funnels but to be honest we all have, although you have to keep this in mind

when your ellipses are going on the middle line not only are they getting smaller but they are also getting narrower the closer they are getting to the middle the more it turns into an oval, at least thats how i looked at it

3: boxes

Your boxes look good and you seem to have understood the concepts of perspective

But here's some things to note

• The rotating boxes would need to be a little narrower in some areas, but i won't be too hard on them cause they are quite hard to get right

• Could use a little bit more variation in the angles of the boxes on the organic perspective exercise

Overall you did a really good job! on lesson 1 there are some problems with the ellipses bit but it's nothing catastrophic,

as for perspective i believe you'll have plenty of more time to improve it on the 250 box challenge

I will give you some homework on thing that i believe you should focus on and then ill mark your lesson as complete

Also i really recommends using some or the exercises as warmups before your drawing session so you don't get rusty!

hello

thanks for taking the time to look at my homework

i dunno how i managed to put the same funnels twice but anyway here's the revisions

hope i've done them better this time

https://imgur.com/a/DDECYKM

(if this link doesn't work let me know)