MEANDI

Wow, I didn't expect that haha, I actually thought that I will fail the challenge and will have to do some revisions, thank you so much!

I will move on to the lesson 6!

Great! I'll move on to cylinders and take additional notes from this critique.

Thank you

Saulius

Hey!

First of all thank you for this in-depth feedback, I did some note taking based on it and I took a second look at the lesson 4 feedback as you mentioned as well. Also I will not do any more official homework on my sketchbook, I will stick to printer paper in the future and in this revision.

Here is the actual homework.

https://imgur.com/a/9wkzHsF

I've added a third page to Organic intersections, because I felt that the first page was full of mistakes and I didn't do my best work. And also I have added some detail to the head fur of the lion, even though you said not to add any detail, I felt that the whole mass ballon around his head looked really weird, so I added some.

Now that being said, these animal pages are not my first attempts at those given days. When I was working I usually did around 1-2 failed attempts pages and just started over, because I wanted to show my best efforts on these given revisions. Let me know if that's okay to do or if I should always just show my "first shots" in the homework. I will attach my failed attempts if you want to look at them here however: https://imgur.com/a/neohafm

Also I went on a trip just after I got your feedback, so when I was there I still decided to do some drawings on my sketchbook (I didn't want to take all the printer paper haha) I still did some animal studies while I was there (Note that this was before I started doing actual homework) I didn't shy away on adding texture on some of these, because these were just for fun. Anyway, I thought I might add them here if you want to take a look:

https://imgur.com/a/J9qJl1w

That being said feel free to completely ignore the second and the third links and just give the feedback on the actual homework revisions.

All that being said, I still feel that I did a bunch of mistakes even on my actual homework, so if it is for the best I am more then welcome to do more of these revisions.

Thank you so much,

Saulius

Thank you! I definitely agree with you, these prompts are very cool way to challenge your creative muscles!

Thanks! Definitely, frankenstein's monster has these super thick eyebrows, that's why it's similar :D

thnx!

Thank you Captain!

Thank you!!

Hey! :)

That is a very in depth critique and I appreciate it very much. I will try incorporate the things you talked about in my next exercises.

Thank you!

Saulius

Thank you! I just want to say that I feel so much improvement overall, this course is a godsend haha.

I will try to make adjustments based on your feedback in the lesson 4!