Lo999

I went through this response very slowly and carefully. Thank you, it's extremely helpful, and a lot of stuff is clicking. Right now I'm focused on Unit 7 but once I finish that this is definitely what I want to revisit.

Thanks for your feedback, and for not asking me to do this again omg. It was so hard and so boring (but definitely worth it of course!)

Quick question -- can I submit the 25 texture challenge (2 weeks from now) before moving on to the vehicles?

Thank you for this feedback! You're right that I got a big sloppy with the ghosting, and the work with the minor axis bit did seem to escape me somehow for the first section of this challenge.

I'll be sure to address these points in my personal exercises as I move on to section 6.

-Lo999

Ahh thanks for your comments! Glad to hear my efforts paid off. I knew there was something off with those forms that have arbitrary corners, but I was having trouble identifying what it was. That's really helpful, thanks for noting that.

Looking forward to the next challenge!

Hello,

At long last, here are my lesson 5 revisions https://imgur.com/a/WKptGXU Let me know what you think. I'm happy to do more redraws as necessary.

-Lo999

Hello,

Thank you so much for putting all this effort into my critique. I wanted to let you know that I'm deeply sitting with your comments and the concepts I missed in this section -- my little brain is working hard on these problems, even when I'm not drawing. It might be a few weeks before I come back with my redraws, but I haven't dropped the ball!!

Best,

Lo999

Hello,

Thanks so much for taking the time to give me this critique, and I'm sorry for the delay in my response. Here are my revisions -- please let me know if there are any enduring issues and I'll be sure to address them.

Thank you so much for this feedback! This is really useful, I'm very grateful. I will work on curbing that habit of redrawing lines. Unfortunately I'm reading this a little late, so I may have done some redrawing on the 250 box challenge, but in general I think it was a lot less than before. Looking forward to submitting that and continuing to advance.