1:08 PM, Saturday May 30th 2020
I see. Thank you for the response!
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Koutokii
Basics Brawler
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koutokii's Sketchbook
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Your lines are good! You have a smooth and strong confident line in your work which is good. Keep going for that.
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Your ellipses are also good! You made it with the smooth strong confident line to the table,planes, and funnels. On the funnel, I saw some misalignment there but I think that's okay.
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Your boxes is amazing! You can execute the confident line on your boxes and I'm admire your work to your rough and organic perspective, although not perfect but you have a excellent execution for these homeworks.
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There are some inaccuracy in these works but that's okay, what's important now is the smoothness of line.
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6:23 AM, Friday May 29th 2020
Hello there pal! Thanks for the critique on my work last time, these are my summary for your work, I know its late but I hope this will be helpful:
I hope these will help you for your work, just keep practicing by warm-up exercises. Best of luck for you!
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3:55 AM, Friday May 29th 2020
Yow pal! Your lines looks like have a confident and nice look, although in the superimposed lines, sometimes the start point of the line has some feathering and inconsistent look, be careful to point your pen first to the start point. Your ellipses needs to go through 2 or 3 times, but 2 is enough. Don't also forget to use ghosting method, this method will be your companion for your homeworks and exercises. And in the organic pers, avoid the dramatic foreshortening as much as you can. Those are the mistakes I'd found out, but overall, GOOD!
Next Steps:
Good Luck out there pal!
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3:42 AM, Friday May 29th 2020
Hello there pal! I want to congratulate you for the completion of lesson 1. Your works looks great and neat haha! Even though there are some rooms that you need to improve like the ellipses and boxes, but that's okay, practice will make you much better! Good Luck out there fellow pal!
Next Steps:
Those mistakes I said earlier will be corrected by practice, so that's okay. Don't grind too much.
You can go now to the next level!
3:35 AM, Friday May 29th 2020
That's right pal! Good Luck!
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2:37 PM, Thursday May 28th 2020
Hi pal! First, I wanna congratulate you for the completion of lesson 1! Your works are looks great, although there is only mistake that I've found out but the rest of it are good.
Next Steps:
*Try to practice more to meet the ellipses to the line/s of the table/planes.
I'm sure the improvement will come to you!
You can go now to the next level! GL pal!
2:18 PM, Thursday May 28th 2020
You're welcome pal!
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12:20 PM, Thursday May 28th 2020
I think your work is good. Even though it will not going to be perfect but still its good. There are some points that you need to improve like the ellipses (doesn't meet to the lines of planes), and boxes on organic perspective (there are some a bit of dramatic foreshortening).
That's okay, just keep practicing and the improvement will come to you! Btw, congrats for the completion of lesson 1!
Next Steps:
You can go now to the next level!
12:06 PM, Thursday May 28th 2020
Wow thank you for the pieces of advice! I'll admit that sometimes I did those mistakes for some reason but I will do much better next time. Btw, thanks pal!
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8:03 AM, Thursday May 28th 2020
Hi pal! I want to congratulate you because you finally finished the lesson 1! I've noticed some mistakes that you made but, it doesn't matter, what important is just keep practicing but don't grind too much. Overall of your work is good enough!
Next Steps:
*Some of your ghosted lines has arcing lines, which is a mistake according to uncomfortable
*I also noticed that your superimposed lines have some feathering and inconsistency in your stating points. Although your lines aren't going to be perfect, make sure they're all START at the same point.
*Some of your ellipses doesn't meet the line/s of the table/ellipses.
Don't feel bad for this critique, this will help you to improve from your mistakes, just keep practicing and keep going pal!
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