5:27 PM, Friday August 19th 2022
thanx i am not good enough yet so i will do my own 50 animal challenge
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Kevin
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2:32 AM, Thursday August 11th 2022
okay i will keep this in mind and do it better. thanx for bringing in this attention
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3:14 PM, Wednesday August 10th 2022
superimposed lines and other lines are wobbly.
to follow how to do properly:-
https://youtu.be/UK6hgH4UeUs?list=PLQzfPQVzjLdrWojiWIXmafboPte268aaG
as well for the others as well:-
make sure you don't rush:-
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I hope you do this again and send it here as revision.
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2:49 PM, Tuesday August 9th 2022
wow the leaves are well done with variety and as for the arrows 1st and 2nd page has some weird turns so for that look at this video:-
Branches also very well done, so not much for me too say here.
the construction of plant is well done and seems you have understood the purpose of the exercise.
the cactus have a bit of 3d problem so for that look at my cactus here:-
https://drive.google.com/file/d/11IWEtsnt3-wLmqXt-YM0shnnrwhLzDa_/view?usp=sharing
other than that its good.
Next Steps:
you can move unto next lesson and good luck
1:20 PM, Tuesday August 9th 2022
be very careful in chapter 4 sometimes the bugs body decieves you so make sure to look at all angles before drawing bugs of your own.
1:02 PM, Monday August 8th 2022
thanx already soing 250 cylinders
6:47 PM, Wednesday August 3rd 2022
great now move on and goodluck
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3:09 AM, Wednesday August 3rd 2022
Arrows:-
you are doing arrows wrong, u are not keeping perspective in mind the further something is the smaller it is the closer it is the bigger it is.
check this link:-
and redo this exercise.
the leaves and others are well done enough.
Branches:-
branches for proper branches make sure u draw ellipses 90 degrees to the flow line that wat it will be better.
Next Steps:
redo the arrow exercise and send it here to be checked. and go through the drawabox arrow exercise video and written material again.
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4:16 PM, Tuesday August 2nd 2022
Arrows:-
arrows are well done
Sausages with ellipse and contour:-
you drew them equally but you drew to many ellipse the purpose of this exercise is to only make u understand 3D so make only 3 ellipse thats it for that same with the contouring.
Texture:-
texture well done you drew cast shadows which is what we want.
Texture on sausages:-
here the problem is in the first page where u should have drawn only cast shadows denser at the edges but fainter when you go towards the middle but you corrected that in after dawings so thats fine.
2nd texture top left of the sheet looks flat the crevices shadows are not made around the sausage contour
and u forgot that the center will be seen as well. since it is a sliced cucumber like shape.
the rest is done well, intersection exercise was hard to begin with so, i will just say if u have a bit of problem check this link:-
my final note:- make sure to practice sausages before doing any drawing since its very important in the coming chapters. and goodluck.
Next Steps:
you can move on to next lesson.
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4:06 AM, Tuesday August 2nd 2022
you did your exercise very good but somethings,
the extended branches needs to be drawn properly:-
https://drawabox.com/lesson/3/2/exercisebranches
look closely the braches hav a thin width when branching out so, for that make sure you draw ellipse close then draw circle over them not the circle first!
for the plants construction you understood the purpose of exercise.
but good job overall
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you can move on to next lesson
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