Kevin

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    2:32 AM, Thursday August 11th 2022

    okay i will keep this in mind and do it better. thanx for bringing in this attention

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    3:14 PM, Wednesday August 10th 2022

    superimposed lines and other lines are wobbly.

    to follow how to do properly:-

    https://youtu.be/UK6hgH4UeUs?list=PLQzfPQVzjLdrWojiWIXmafboPte268aaG

    as well for the others as well:-

    make sure you don't rush:-

    https://www.youtube.com/c/ScyllaStew

    Next Steps:

    I hope you do this again and send it here as revision.

    When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
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    2:49 PM, Tuesday August 9th 2022

    wow the leaves are well done with variety and as for the arrows 1st and 2nd page has some weird turns so for that look at this video:-

    https://youtu.be/ptV6MOWSaYA

    Branches also very well done, so not much for me too say here.

    the construction of plant is well done and seems you have understood the purpose of the exercise.

    the cactus have a bit of 3d problem so for that look at my cactus here:-

    https://drive.google.com/file/d/11IWEtsnt3-wLmqXt-YM0shnnrwhLzDa_/view?usp=sharing

    other than that its good.

    Next Steps:

    you can move unto next lesson and good luck

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    1:20 PM, Tuesday August 9th 2022

    be very careful in chapter 4 sometimes the bugs body decieves you so make sure to look at all angles before drawing bugs of your own.

    1:02 PM, Monday August 8th 2022

    thanx already soing 250 cylinders

    6:47 PM, Wednesday August 3rd 2022

    great now move on and goodluck

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    3:09 AM, Wednesday August 3rd 2022

    Arrows:-

    you are doing arrows wrong, u are not keeping perspective in mind the further something is the smaller it is the closer it is the bigger it is.

    check this link:-

    https://youtu.be/icWl_jpJres

    and redo this exercise.

    the leaves and others are well done enough.

    Branches:-

    branches for proper branches make sure u draw ellipses 90 degrees to the flow line that wat it will be better.

    Next Steps:

    redo the arrow exercise and send it here to be checked. and go through the drawabox arrow exercise video and written material again.

    When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
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    4:16 PM, Tuesday August 2nd 2022

    Arrows:-

    arrows are well done

    Sausages with ellipse and contour:-

    you drew them equally but you drew to many ellipse the purpose of this exercise is to only make u understand 3D so make only 3 ellipse thats it for that same with the contouring.

    Texture:-

    texture well done you drew cast shadows which is what we want.

    Texture on sausages:-

    here the problem is in the first page where u should have drawn only cast shadows denser at the edges but fainter when you go towards the middle but you corrected that in after dawings so thats fine.

    2nd texture top left of the sheet looks flat the crevices shadows are not made around the sausage contour

    and u forgot that the center will be seen as well. since it is a sliced cucumber like shape.

    the rest is done well, intersection exercise was hard to begin with so, i will just say if u have a bit of problem check this link:-

    https://youtu.be/7ccsCsmov1U

    my final note:- make sure to practice sausages before doing any drawing since its very important in the coming chapters. and goodluck.

    Next Steps:

    you can move on to next lesson.

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    4:06 AM, Tuesday August 2nd 2022

    you did your exercise very good but somethings,

    the extended branches needs to be drawn properly:-

    https://drawabox.com/lesson/3/2/exercisebranches

    look closely the braches hav a thin width when branching out so, for that make sure you draw ellipse close then draw circle over them not the circle first!

    for the plants construction you understood the purpose of exercise.

    but good job overall

    Next Steps:

    you can move on to next lesson

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    3:54 AM, Tuesday August 2nd 2022

    Hi I am going to go over your Lesson 3, first of all congrats at getting back and now,

    Arrows:-

    some of your arrows are wonky, not bad but i suggest to be more loose with your hand and you need to keep in mind the perspective, the farther something is the smaller the closer something is the bigger it is,

    here check this out for arrows:-

    https://youtu.be/ptV6MOWSaYA

    Leaves:-

    They are done well, but i would suggest to do more curve leaves for example :-

    https://youtu.be/T39HglB8KJc

    Branches:-

    The branches are done well, nothing much to say here.

    Plants Construction:-

    well at least here your leaves are done very well, i don't see a problem here

    so have just follow the above link do that before you move on to the next lesson.

    Next Steps:

    I am marking this as complete but remeber to check the links above, and good luck with your future lessons

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