3:43 PM, Friday November 15th 2024
Hello, and congratulations on finishing lesson 1! Of Dab, I'm Kat, and I'll be critiquing your work. Let's get started.
Starting off with lines
Your superimposed lines are well done, I see no fraying from the start of your lines, and I like how nice and confident your lines are. Moving on to ghosted lines, your lines are well done, there isn't much to say here.
Ghosted planes + Ellipses in planes
Your lines are nice and confident, and there's a good amount of arcing on your planes. And I liked how your striving to hit all borders of the planes.
Tables of ellipses
I like how nice and snug your ellipses are, and I can tell your drawing through your ellipses at least two to three times.
Funnels
Your funnels look well done. And I like how nice and snug your funnels are, I can see a nice degree shift on your funnels. And I can tell you're lining up your ellipses into two even symmetrical halves.
Moving on to boxes
Plotted perspective
Your plotted perspective looks well done. There isn't much to say here. I like how you've taken your time to cross-hatch your boxes.
Rough perspective
Your rough perspective looks well done, there isn't much to say here.
Rotated boxes
Your rotated boxes are well done. I can tell your boxes are roated clearly towards a vanshing point.
And lastly, organic perspective
You've done really well here, there's a good amount of box rotations with size variety and depth, and you'll do even better during the 250 challenge.
Overall, this was a strong submission, and I can confidently mark this lesson as complete congratulations. Add the rest of lesson 1 to your pool of warm-ups and move on to the 250 box challenge. If you have any questions, simply reply below.
Good luck with the 250 box challenge and the rest of Dab.
Next Steps:
Add lesson 1 to your pool of warm-ups and move on to the 250-box challenge