Jundy

Thank you so much for the critique I really appreciate it!

Overall, good job, just make sure you are always ghosting when doing your lines for boxes. I'm noticing some wobbling in the rough perspective exercise.

sorry, forgot to mark the lesson as complete

Pretty good work, the only things i'd like to point out is that you could give your boxes a bit more rotation in the organic perspectives, although you'll work on this a lot in the 250 box challenge. Also, make sure to continue ghosting lines when drawing boxes to keep the edges straight.

Pretty solid, one thing that stood out to me however is that in the ellipses tables, it seems that one of your ellipses was a circle that did not seem to touch all the edges. Just rememeber that it should stretch to fit the entire plane. Also in plotted perspective, be weary of wobbling lines.

One thing i'd like to point out is that on eyour ghosted lines excercise, it seems that you seem to struggle when the gaps between dots get very large. Id recommend just ghosting a bit more, and making sure you are using your shoulders at all times, but other wise great work!

This is pretty good, your lines have very confident trajectories, and flow. I'd say one issue I see in your exercises are the organic boxes exercise at the end. Remember that no two sets of lines should be parallel, and should always converge to a point. And make sure some of your circles and elipses in the plane exercise touch all sides. Other than that, quite solid!

Thank you!

https://imgur.com/a/2S2J0dQ

Here is the redo of the funnels excercise, I hope I put enough variation in them!

Thank you!