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Thank you for taking the time to see my homework. You go very in depth on so many things, this critique was very useful and confirm some of my feeling while doing this lesson. For the boxes, before doing this lesson i thought that i was at a good point with it, and even if my form are not terrible i really want to get better. Thanks for sharing the material (especially about form intersection), i will study it and do some exercise on my own. For object construction, i will follow your suggestion of doing orthographic plans ven for simpler object. About shading, i wasn't sure how to about it, now i understand what i'm suppose to do and apply this knowledge in the 25 Wheel Challenge and Lesson 7. I really thank you for this critiqueit really helped me understand my error and it was very enlightening. Thanks again nd soory for the late reply!!

Ok thanks so much for the advice and taking the time to see my drawing .

Thanks so much Purpel

Thanks so much , I will follow your advice. I have always problem with the ellipses and the minor axis if you have any suggestion or exercise that was useful to you personally please tell me. Thanks again.

Thanks so much for the review, i will focus more on the degree of the ellipses .

Ty so much for having time to critique my drawing, fore the ghosted line/plane i really struggle to finish the line to the end point, the tecnique suggested in lesson 1 work but i have trouble using it, i think more i do and really put time on theme should resolve right??(or so i hope). I will do more work on ellipses. Again ty lily for spend your time for me, you really helped me hope you hav a good day :))) (sorry if did some error im not native english speaker)