I grinded the sausages cause I wasn't happy with the results nor am I happy with them rn. I don't know why but my line work still looks kinda bad and I didn't do the texture on the fish because I didn't want to but anyways here is the link https://imgur.com/a/XQJRWVO
Yup good job!! sry i accidently wrote rough perspective
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250 box challenge
I tried to not rush this time and, my drawings actually looks better! Thank you so much for critiquing my work sparrow, really means a lot!
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Hi! I'm H_R7 or Harshdeep on discord. Today I will be critiquing your work
Superimposed lines:- Great job!
Ghosted lines:-Great job!
Ghosted planes:- Great job! You did more than suggested but good!
Table of ellipses:-Good job! Your ellipses fit snuggly and the markmaking is confident
Ellipses in planes:-Remember to draw over your ellipses only 2-3 times, no more no less
Funnels:-Good!
Plotted perspective:-Good job with the perspective!
Rough perspective:- good job on the perspective and line extensions, but your lines are a bit wobbly, this will improve overtime
Rotated boxes:-Good job no need to do it 2 times
Organic perspective:- Excellent work! Some of your lines look very confident, I see some wobbliness too. Good job on the perspective!
Overall:- You have definately repeated some exercises more than recommended, this is called grinding, do not do this. All of your exercises are almost perfect!
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you are good to go to the 250 box challenge and also, don't do the same exercise more than the homework tells you to
Thank you so much for taking your time and giving me such a detailed critique I truly appreciate it!
Redos:-https://imgur.com/a/yPN5dmw
Hi! I'm H_R7 or Harshdeep on discord. Today I will be critiquing your work
Superimposed lines:- Great job!
Ghosted lines:-Great job!
Ghosted planes:- Great job!
Table of ellipses:-Good job! Your ellipses fit snuggly, remember to make good use of the ghosting method
Ellipses in planes:-Some of your lines are lacking confidence, remember make good use of the ghosting method, it is your friend
Ellipses in planes:- Very good!
Funnels:-Some Lines could have been confident, but very good job!
Plotted perspective:-Good job with the perspective!
Rough perspective:- good job on the perspective and line extensions, but your some of your lines could be more confident
Rotated boxes:-Good job!
Organic perspective is good but remember to keep your hatch clean
Overall not much to critique you are well prepped for the 250 box challenge
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What to do next:- Move onto the 250 box challenge
Hi! I'm H_R7 or Harshdeep on discord. Today I will be critiquing your work
Superimposed lines are confident but arch Which maybe due to you using your elbow or just because of your brain, try arching them intentionally in the opposite direction in order to cancel the arch entirely,
Ghosted lines:-There is some wobbling especially on the longer lines. Please remember that being confident in your lines is key.
Ghosted planes:- Great job!
Table of ellipses:-Good job! Your ellipses fit snuggly and the markmaking is confident
Ellipses in planes:-Ellipses fit snuggle and follow their respective perspective. Good job!
Funnels:-Good, only suggestion would be to try and draw over your ellipses only 2 times, 3 is fine but 2 is recommended
Plotted perspective:-Good job with the perspective
Rough perspective:- good job on the perspective and line extensions, but your lines lack confidence as they are wobbly, this will get better over time however
Rotated boxes:-Remember to keep your boxes spaced evenly and lines confident, You've not draw the upper and lower to two boxes please draw them before moving on
Organic perspective:- Excellent work! Some of your lines look very confident, remember to not draw over your lines, this is a bad habit that i developed and I still struggle because of it. Good job on the perspective!
Next Steps:
What to do next:- Move onto the 250 box challenge
Hi! Im H_R7 or Harshdeep on discord. Today I will be reviewing your work.
Ghosted lines:- are confident but arch Which maybe due to you using your elbow or just because of your brain, try arching them intentionally in the opposite direction in order to cancel the arch entirely,
Ghosted planes:- Great job!
Table of ellipses:-Good job!
Ellipses in planes:- Good job!
Ellipses in planes:- Some of your ellipses are shaped unevenly, this maybe be due to the fact that you aren't using the correct pivot(shoulder), this will get better as you practice
Funnels:-good job!
Plotted perspective:-good job!
Rough perspective:- good job on the perspective and line extensions, Line quality and confidence will improve over time
Rotated boxes:- Good job!
Organic perspective:- Excellent work! Some of your lines look very confident!
Overall you're work shows a deep understanding of the concepts being discussed, I am marking this lesson of yours as complete
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Add these to your warmups. Next up is the 250 box challenge
Hi! I'm H_R7 or Harshdeep on discord. Today I will be critiquing your work
Superimposed lines:- There is some fraying on both sides of the line, this may be due to the fact that you aren't placing your hand on the correct place which maybe because you are rushing or not looking where you are starting your line
Ghosted lines:- are confident but arch Which maybe due to you using your elbow or just because of your brain, try arching them intentionally in the opposite direction in order to cancel the arch entirely,
Ghosted planes:- Great job!
Table of ellipses:-Remember to draw through your ellipses 2-3 times, in some of your ellipses, it appears that you lift your pen after you draw an ellipse and then draw over it again, refrain from doing this
Ellipses in planes:- Good job!
Ellipses in planes:- Some of your ellipses are shaped unevenly, this maybe be due to the fact that you aren't using the correct pivot(shoulder), or this could be due to a lack of practice
Funnels:-good job!
Plotted perspective:-good job!
Rough perspective:- good job on the perspective and line extensions, Line quality and confidence will improve over time
Rotated boxes:- You've not draw the uppermost left, right and lowermost left,right boxes, please draw them before moving on
Organic perspective:- Excellent work! Some of your lines look very confident, just remember to make sure that the lines are converging away from the viewer. Please do not scribble your hatching
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What to do next:- Move onto the 250 box challenge
There are supposed to be 5 boxes in each row and columm. The boxes I've told you to draw are basically going to be invisible, as they are kinda hidden behind the other boxes , so make sure that you are drawing through them. The boxes i am talking about are the uppermost left, right and lowermost left, right boxes. Hope this clears any doubts!
Right from when students hit the 50% rule early on in Lesson 0, they ask the same question - "What am I supposed to draw?"
It's not magic. We're made to think that when someone just whips off interesting things to draw, that they're gifted in a way that we are not. The problem isn't that we don't have ideas - it's that the ideas we have are so vague, they feel like nothing at all. In this course, we're going to look at how we can explore, pursue, and develop those fuzzy notions into something more concrete.
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