Grumdere

Dimensional Dominator

The Resilient (Summer 2024)

Joined 2 years ago

125 Reputation

grumdere's Sketchbook

  • The Resilient (Summer 2024)
  • The Resilient (Spring 2024)
  • Sharing the Knowledge
  • Dimensional Dominator
  • The Relentless
  • Basics Brawler
    1 users agree
    4:19 PM, Monday May 20th 2024

    Hey There!

    •The Problems in (superimposed lines, ghost planes, rough perspective, rotated boxes and organic perspective ) you are facing are wobbly lines. So try to loosen up yourself and try ghosting more and relax draw with confidence.

    •We all are beginners so we tend to make mistake but we have to realize and tackle the problem and solve it.

    For Ellipses also try ghosting more and draw after ghosting ( without stoping).

    • Superimposed lines try to avoid fraying ( distortion) at the starting and end of the line.

    • Try to understand what Uncomfortable (Irshad) is saying in the video also read the text all knowledge he shares is useful so try not to ignore.

    Stay Consistent and Happy Journey!

    Next Steps:

    1 Page of Ghosted Planes (with ellipses) and Rough Perspective

    When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
    1 users agree
    3:28 AM, Friday January 8th 2021

    Congratulations on completeing lesson 1.

    1. Super-imposed Lines : Try to take time to draw those as it will help you make muscle memory and try not to rush while rush it. Lines are meant to be confident and to the point.

    2. Ghosted Lines : There is some arching in the lines especially the long ones but it will ok if you practice it everyday.

    3. Ghosted Planes+Ellipses in Planes : As said earlier need to improve on your lines and try to do these exercises in order to build muscle memory. Ellipse need some work in smoothness and confidence along with some time given to them as it will help in builing you up for later exercises

    4. Table of Ellipses : Looks good but you have try out different types of Ellipse as this exercise is meant to be done in order to help you build differnet muscle memory. Try to rotate the pages and find a comfortable angle for your hands to move.

    5. Funnels : Looks good but need some work. Ellipse are good but I think that all the Elliipse are of same degree, Try to do different degrees of Ellipses.

    6. Plotted Perspective : Nice work done but some lines are not parallel. It is fine as it will become better as you practice.

    7. Rough Perspective : Here you are trying to guess but this need the knowing where the lines will go as this will be the next exercise i.e. 250 boxes challenge.

    8. Rotated boxes : Looks good but you should read this exercise again as there are some error which you will know by reading through.

    9. Organic Perspective : Same as that of Rough Perspective and read this exercise also.It will really trust me.

    Take some time reading through the exercise and give some time to what you do. Try not to rush through the exercise as each exercises are meant to develop something.

    It is a pass for me as it will be better with time if you really want to improve .

    Next Steps:

    Go on to the 250 boxes challenge and work on the problems mentioned along with the exercise. And try to setup a warm-up routine for everyday to practice so that you can keep the flow of work going through your exercises.

    This community member feels the lesson should be marked as complete. In order for the student to receive their completion badge, this critique will need 2 agreements from other members of the community.
The recommendation below is an advertisement. Most of the links here are part of Amazon's affiliate program (unless otherwise stated), which helps support this website. It's also more than that - it's a hand-picked recommendation of something we've used ourselves, or know to be of impeccable quality. If you're interested, here is a full list.
Clip Studio Paint

Clip Studio Paint

I've used a ton of different drawing and painting software over the course of my career, so I can say with confidence that what CSP offers is impressive.

The software is designed around drawing and painting, and it really shows. The brush engine is extremely dynamic, capturing a wide variety of stroke types and effects, making it easy to emulate traditional media if that's what you're after, while still being able to create very polished digital-style graphics.

It also provides a variety of features to make your life easier on a wide variety of projects - from speech bubble and framing tools for comics, to perspective and ellipse guides, to bringing in 3D assets to streamline the production process, to multi-page files, and more. At every turn, it puts the control in your hands, so you can focus on what it is you want to create.

We use cookies in conjunction with Google Analytics to anonymously track how our website is used.

This data is not shared with any other parties or sold to anyone. They are also disabled until consent is provided by clicking the button below, and this consent can be revoked at any time by clicking the "Revoke Analytics Cookie Consent" link in our website footer.

You can read more about what we do with them, read our privacy policy.