FishingGuppy

Hello, good job on finishing lesson 1 !

Your superimposed lines don't have fraying on both end of the line, which is good. There is a bit of arching in some lines, but the problems has been solved in the ghosted lines.

Your ghosted planes are well done : the lines are drawn with confidence from the shoulder (there's just a bit of undershooting/overshooting in some lines, but you'll be able to improve this point during the 250 boxes challenge).

As for the table of ellipse and the ellipses in plane, those are drawn with confidence, as there is no wobbling, which is good, but some ellipses aren't in bound of the space they're in. Your ellipses snug well in funnels, which is improvement !

Some lines aren't drawn as confidently as before in rough perspective. It's completely fine, as you'll be training this skill during the 250 boxes challenge.

The perspective and rotation on rotated boxes are overall well drawn.

The different rotations in organic perspective are good, some problems with perspective from time to time but nothing too problematic.

As a reminder, you can use line weight by ghosting once outer lines of boxes to improve perspective and make i easier to see which part of the box is the front and which one is the back. This method will be used in the next lessons, starting with the 250 boxes.

I'll mark this lesson as complete. Have fun with the 250 box challenge !

Hello, good job on finishing the first lesson !

To begin, I'll say that your lines on the ghosting method only fray on one end of the line, which is good. There's a bit of arching and wobbling in some lines, but this issue can be corrected with practice over time. Sometimes, you also tend to overshoot/undershoot lines, which results in some lines being a bit too short or too long. However, you'll have plenty of time to improve during the 250 boxes challenge.

Some ellipses in planes and in the tables aren't touching the border of the planes.

There's improvement in the funnels, where almost all of the ellipses are in bound of the funnel and next to each other (as a side note, the minor axis (the middle line) is not always everytime, so try to pay attention to it.)

On rough perspectives, lines are well oriented, which is good !

Your rotated boxes looks great ! (The only issue being the boxes not symmetrical to the line going up, but it's a minor problem)

Your lines have less arching in organic perspective, which shows improvement and is a great point.

As a side note, you can use lightweight to show more clearly which side of the box is in the front and in the back, by ghosting once the line you which to emphasize. This technique will be used in the future lessons.

Overall, you did a great job and I'll mark this lesson as complete. Have fun with the 250 boxes !

Thanks for your time and answer ! I'll watch out for every details which are to improve when training.