1:08 PM, Saturday October 5th 2024
Hi Bavulture, Congratulations on finishing the 250 box challenge. I'll be giving you feedback. Pointing out mistakes you've made as well as thing you did good.
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Your lineworks looks very confident. The lines are straight and don't over or undershoot their mark. Hatching also looks very consistent. I would suggest adding extra lineweight to the contour of the boxes as it sets the boxes better apart from the paper and it is good exercise for your line placing.
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There is a bit of variation in the orientation of your boxes. I encourage you to push this further. Look at this diagram of different possible orientations. A lot of this comes down to changing the length and direction of your starting Y-shape.
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Some of your boxes (nrs. 170, 180, 186, 214, 216, 225, 230, 235 to name a few) look a bit warped. This is due to one of the angles of the initial Y-shape being smaller than 90°. When using this method of drawing boxes the starting Y-shape always has it's lines at angles greater than 90°.
Overall very nice work. Good luck with lesson 2
Next Steps:
- Continue with lesson 2