4:11 PM, Wednesday May 5th 2021
My english is bad. Hope the translator translates correctly.
thanks for writing to me and for the criticisms. I misunderstood the first exercise, he will mean that I will do it before starting lesson 5.
thanks for the various suggestions, including inserting some ellipses to make some parts look more 3D (as you said in particular the legs on which the sausages look flat) and as for the wings of the moth, I'm not particularly satisfied too how they came. They are a bit messy and they came too flat, despite the fact that they are still wings. Making the tongenating "bone" with the countourn lines and hooking the membrane as thin as a leaf could be more effective.
I will also be more attentive to the weight of the line, something that I still have to work on a lot.
Thanks again for writing to me, I'll try to pay attention to these suggestions for the future.