2:31 PM, Saturday September 24th 2022
Hello! Nice job finishing the first lesson! Here are my observations:
Lines
Your lines seem pretty confident, which is most important here. Some of the longer lines on your superimposed lines pages have fraying on both sides, which is something you should avoid.
Ellipses
Looks solid to me in general.
Boxes
Perspective looks rough at places but that's completely normal and expected at this stage. It will get better after 250 boxes challenge.
All in all, good job!
Next Steps:
You are ready for the 250 boxes challenge :D Ellipses in planes are a really cool warm-up exercise so I recommend doing it from time to time (like a page before drawing session)