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Hi DIO,

Thank you very much for the critique! Also, apologies for not uploading the organic intersections properly.

About the "drawing through" the organic intersections part, this is actually something I tried in warm ups after I saw you mention it in other students' critiques. But I found it quite difficult to wrap my head around it because the outlines of the form in the front don't seem to mesh well with the ones in the back. In this example I find that drawing through the sausages makes them look more flat. Do you have any examples or suggestions for solving this in a more 3D way?

Thank you for the guidance and kind words!

Thank you!

That's great to know, thank you for the clarification!

Thank you for the extensive feedback. It answered a few more questions that came up while doing the homework.

If you don't mind me adding another one, are cast shadows considered texture in the context of DAB? Looking at L4 for example, should I only add cast shadows to the last 6 pages of insects? Or are cast shadows "allowed" in the first 4 pages as well, for establishing the spatial relationships between forms?

Thank you for the helpful comments and suggestions, I'll be sure to come back to them during warm ups.

Have a nice week!

Thank you!

Hi Tofu

Thank you for the thorough critique! I do try to lift my pen when I reach the end point but it seems I just need more practice with it.

Hope you'll have an enjoyable break!

Thank you for answering my question and for the critique! I'm glad I don't need to do any additional boxes haha

Thanks for the tips on lines, funnels and rough perspective. Regarding the organic perspective exercise, I think I was lead astray by the video thumbnail about drawing through the boxes. Appreciate the note about line weight there as well.

Thank you!