8:16 AM, Wednesday May 1st 2024
Thank you Rob !
Have a nice day ;)
Warm regards.
Mr Elliott BIEHLER
Thank you Rob !
Have a nice day ;)
Warm regards.
Mr Elliott BIEHLER
Hi Rob!
Thanks again for your constructive criticism.
This first lesson was difficult for me and I was afraid of a severe revision. But your intervention was very motivating and I feel relieved.
When you said : "All of your horizontal lines should be parallel to the horizon line and all of your verticals should be perpendicular(straight up and down in this case) to the horizon line", I had completely forgotten that part. And now that you've mentioned it, it makes perfect sense. Thank you very much.
You're right, I really do have trouble with ellipses, I'm taking a living model course, and every time I have to draw a curved line, it’s really hard (If you have advices for that, I’m interested)
You said in your message : "you keep practicing these in your warmups”, I don't know if this will be precise in the next lesson, but I haven't really understood how this part works. Is it me, or the person who gave me a review, who chooses which warm-ups I should do?
In any case, I'll give you a good rating for your critique. You really deserved it ;)
I don't know if we'll meet again, but I wish you a good day and a great weekend, Rob !
Warm regards.
Mr Elliott BIEHLER
This is one of my favourite books. It's a fantasy-comedy romp, and the world that J. Zachary Pike has created honestly takes my breath away. There are laughs at every turn, but the story is not without its heart wrenching moments - some for which I have yet to fully forgive the author.
If you're at all curious about the kinds of nonsense I read, or just need something new to sink your teeth into, this is one I can highly recommend. On top of that, being self-published by an indie author, it's the kind of thing where your individual support can go a long way.
P.S: The audiobook, with narration from Doug Tisdale, is especially good, and elevates the story in ways I can't rightly describe.
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