DARKLIGHT1

Hi Goodmoring/Goodnight I am Darklight

i would like to say Congratulations on finishing the Lesson 1.

1.Superimposed Lines

Although your line are fraying on both ends ,I can see that you are trying to do it in the 1st although it is not perfect I can say it is good with enough practice you can master it.

Your lines are confident great job.

2.Ghosted Lines

Your lines are confident as I said earlier. Few overshooting which is not bad. a very litte few undershooting. You did great job hitting the start dot and end. It's actually so gOod

3.Ghosted Planes

It's so perfect that you have very confident line. Most of them hitting start to end dots.

Your execution are Awesome

4.Tables of Ellipses

Overall you did great job being confident and great job almost all of the circle are snuggles each other its so clean and beautiful. Although the circle are not accurate just keep practicing and you will master it.

5.Ellipses in Planes

Same as tables of ellipeses.

just be mindful on undershooting on somecircle. overshooting is better than undershooting those circle to establish confident circles. but overall u did great.

6.Funnels

Great work being confident

A few of the ellipse are not snugly against one another so be mindful of that. great Job

Great job on the minor axis (the line in the middle) it cut ellipses in 2 symetrical halves.

A few undershooting again just be mindful on that so next time you do it you won't do the same mistake.

7.Plotted Perspective

Great work on this.

LOVE THAT YOU HAVE OVERLAPPING BOXES

8.Rough Perspective

LINES ARE CONFIDENT THAT GOOD.

You did great job Hitting the VP of some lines

And plotting the front of the boxes

9.Rotated Boxes

It's so clean i like it.

The gaps are consistent

most of the boxes are pointing towards Vp

some of the boxes are not hitting the middle vp but you will have a lot opportunity on fixing this on 250 box just be mindfull on that.

A few wobbles but it's still good

You really did great Job on this thing.

10.Organic Perspective

Your lines here are confident, some lines are wobbly just be mindful on that.

You did great making small boxes as they are far.

some of it are parallel to each other.

This is a very difficult exercise at this stage, so it was to be expected. You will have a lot more opportunity to practice this during the 250 Box Challenge6

Again congratulations on finishing the lesson one you did great overall.

Hi Goodmoring/Goodnight I am Darklight

i would like to say Congratulations on finishing the Lesson 1.

1.Superimposed Lines

Although your line are fraying on both ends ,I can see that you are trying to do it in the 1st although it is not perfect I can say it is good with enough practice you can master it.

Your lines are confident great job.

2.Ghosted Lines

Your lines are confident as I said earlier. Few overshooting which is not bad. a very litte few undershooting. You did great job hitting the start dot and end. It's actually so gOod

3.Ghosted Planes

It's so perfect that you have very confident line. Most of them hitting start to end dots.

Your execution are Awesome

4.Tables of Ellipses

Overall you did great job being confident and great job almost all of the circle are snuggles each other its so clean and beautiful. Although the circle are not accurate just keep practicing and you will master it.

5.Ellipses in Planes

Same as tables of ellipeses.

just be mindful on undershooting on circle. overshooting is better than undershooting those circle to establish confident circles. but overall did great

6.Funnels

Great work being confident

A few of the ellipse are not snugly against one another so be mindful of that. great Job

Great job on the minor axis (the line in the middle) it cut ellipses in 2 symetrical halves.

A few undershooting again just be mindful on that so next time you do it you won't do the same mistake.

7.Plotted Perspective

Great work on this.

8.Rough Perspective

Some of the lines are bit wobbles but the front of box are great

You did great job Hitting the VP of some lines

And plotting the front of the boxes

I suggest you add hatching next time and line weight it helps viewers which is closer and practice you lines

9.Rotated Boxes

It's so clean i like it.

The gaps are consistent

most of the boxes are pointing towards Vp

some of the boxes are not hitting the middle vp but you will have a lot opportunity on fixing this on 250 box just be mindfull on that.

A few wobbles but it's still good

You really did great Job on this thing.

10.Organic Perspective

Your lines here are confident,

You did great making small boxes as they are far.

Some of the lines in the boxes are vanishing towards the vanishing point great job.

some of it are parallel to each other.

This is a very difficult exercise at this stage, so it was to be expected. You will have a lot more opportunity to practice this during the 250 Box Challenge.

Again congratulations on finishing the lesson one you did great overall

Hi Goodmoring/Goodnight I am Darklight

i would like to say Congratulations on finishing the Lesson 1.

1.Superimposed Lines

Although your line are fraying on both ends ,I can see that you are trying to do it in the 1st although it is not perfect I can say it is good with enough practice you can master it.

Your lines are confident great job.

2.Ghosted Lines

Your lines are confident as I said earlier. Few overshooting which is not bad. a very litte few undershooting. You did great job hitting the start dot and end. It's actually so gOod. Just be mindfull that you kinda bend some of the lines.

3.Ghosted Planes

It's so perfect that you have very confident line. Most of them hitting start to end dots.

Some of the lines are woobly just be mindful on that.

Your execution are Awesome

4.Tables of Ellipses

Overall you did great job being confident and great job almost all of the circle are snuggles each other its so clean and beautiful. Although the circle are not accurate just keep practicing and you will master it.

5.Ellipses in Planes

Same as tables of ellipeses.

just be mindful on undershooting on circle. overshooting is better than undershooting those circle to establish confident circles. but overall did great

6.Funnels

Great work snuggling the circle just be mindfull your circle are still wobble.

Great job on the minor axis (the line in the middle) it cut ellipses in 2 symetrical halves.

A few undershooting again just be mindful on that so next time you do it you won't do the same mistake.

7.Plotted Perspective

Great work on this.

I like you have overlap boxes, you could add a line weight to show which box is closer.

8.Rough Perspective

great improvment on the lines.

You did great job Hitting the VP of some lines And plotting the front of the boxes

I suggest that you should add line weight in the front of the boxes and not the inner or back to convey to the viever that it is closer

9.Rotated Boxes

It's so clean i like it.

The gaps are consistent

most of the boxes are pointing towards Vp

some of the boxes are not hitting the middle vp but you will have a lot opportunity on fixing this on 250 box just be mindfull on that.

A few wobbles but it's still good

You really did great Job on this thing.

10.Organic Perspective

Your lines here are confident,

You did great making small boxes as they are far.

Some of the lines in the boxes are vanishing towards the vanishing point great job.

Most of it are parallel to each other.

I can see that you are trying to fix Some face of the box but if you made a mistake just be it and be mindful of it nexttime

This is a very difficult exercise at this stage, so it was to be expected. You will have a lot more opportunity to practice this during the 250 Box Challenge.

Congratulations on finishing the lesson one you did great overall

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Hi Goodmoring/Goodnight I am Darklight

i would like to say Congratulations on finishing the Lesson 1.

1.Superimposed Lines

Although your line are fraying on both ends ,I can see that you are trying to do it in the 1st although it is not perfect I can say it is good with enough practice you can master it.

Your lines are confident great job.

2.Ghosted Lines

Your lines are confident as I said earlier. Few overshooting which is not bad. a very litte few undershooting. You did great job hitting the start dot and end. It's actually so gOod

3.Ghosted Planes

It's so perfect that you have very confident line. Most of them hitting start to end dots.

Your execution are Awesome

4.Tables of Ellipses

Overall you did great job being confident and great job almost all of the circle are snuggles each other its so clean and beautiful. Although the circle are not accurate just keep practicing and you will master it.

5.Ellipses in Planes

Same as tables of ellipeses.

just be mindful on undershooting on circle. overshooting is better than undershooting those circle to establish confident circles. but overall did great

6.Funnels

Great work being confident

A few of the ellipse are not snugly against one another so be mindful of that. great Job

Great job on the minor axis (the line in the middle) it cut ellipses in 2 symetrical halves.

A few undershooting again just be mindful on that so next time you do it you won't do the same mistake.

7.Plotted Perspective

Great work on this.

I like you have overlap boxes, you could add a line weight to show which box is closer.

there is still alot of space that you can fit the boxes, I wish you could added more not a big deal thoug

8.Rough Perspective

your 1st box are not great you should not fix the mistake, but just be it and then be mindful on it next time.

Some of the lines are bit wobbles but the front of box are great

You did great job Hitting the VP of some lines

And plotting the front of the boxes

Few of the boxes in the 1st page is not hitting the intended corner of the box be mindful on that. To fix this you can do ghosted lines.

line weight should be added in the front of the boxes and not the inner or back

9.Rotated Boxes

It's so clean i like it.

The gaps are consistent

most of the boxes are pointing towards Vp

some of the boxes are not hitting the middle vp but you will have a lot opportunity on fixing this on 250 box just be mindfull on that.

A few wobbles but it's still good

You really did great Job on this thing.

10.Organic Perspective

Your lines here are confident,

You did great making small boxes as they are far.

Some of the lines in the boxes are vanishing towards the vanishing point great job.

Most of it are parallel to each other.

This is a very difficult exercise at this stage, so it was to be expected. You will have a lot more opportunity to practice this during the 250 Box Challenge.

Again congratulations on finishing the lesson one you did great overall

Hi Goodmoring/Goodnight I am Darklight

i would like to say Congratulations on finishing the Lesson 1.

1.Superimposed Lines

Although your line are fraying on both ends ,I can see that you are trying to do it in the 1st although it is not perfect I can say it is good with enough practice you can master it.

Your lines are confident great job.

2.Ghosted Lines

Your lines are confident as I said earlier. Few overshooting which is not bad. a very litte few undershooting. You did great job hitting the start dot and end. It's actually so gOod

3.Ghosted Planes

It's so perfect that you have very confident line. Most of them hitting start to end dots.

Your execution are Awesome

4.Tables of Ellipses

Overall you did great job being confident and great job almost all of the circle are snuggles each other its so clean and beautiful. Although the circle are not accurate just keep practicing and you will master it.

**5.Ellipses in Planes

Same as tables of ellipeses.

just be mindful on undershooting on circle. overshooting is better than undershooting those circle to establish confident circles. but overall did great

6.Funnels

Great work being confident

A few of the ellipse are not snugly against one another so be mindful of that. great Job

Great job on the minor axis (the line in the middle) it cut ellipses in 2 symetrical halves.

A few undershooting again just be mindful on that so next time you do it you won't do the same mistake.

7.Plotted Perspective

Great work on this.

I like you have overlap boxes and added a line weight.

8.Rough Perspective

Some of the lines are bit wobbles but the front of box are great

You did great job Hitting the VP of some lines

And plotting the front of the boxes

Few of the boxes in the 1st page is not hitting the intended corner of the box be mindful on that. To fix this you can do ghosted lines.

9.Rotated Boxes

It's so clean i like it.

The gaps are consistent

most of the boxes are pointing towards Vp

some of the box are not hitting the middle part especially the inner coner of the box

https://imgur.com/a/nGb86nI

A few wobbles but it's still good

Your hatching in the shadow is inconsistent some are darker, some are light and undershooting just be mindfull on that not a big deal.

You really did great Job on this thing.

This is a difficult homework but your work beautiful and so clean.

10.Organic Perspective

Your lines here are confident,

You did great making small boxes as they are far.

Some of the lines in the boxes are vanishing towards the vanishing point great job.

Most of it are parallel to each other.

This is a very difficult exercise at this stage, so it was to be expected. You will have a lot more opportunity to practice this during the 250 Box Challenge.

Again congratulations on finishing the lesson one you did great overall

I actually appreciate you making me do reversion. Thank you so much. Sorry if it is bit late.

Here is my revesion

https://imgur.com/a/nlKX4bq

Hi Goodmoring/Goodnight I am Darklight

i would like to say Congratulations on finishing the Lesson 1.

1.Superimposed Lines

Your lines are confident enough great job not fraying on the start and end some are but it's still good.

2.Ghosted Lines

Your lines are confident as I said earlier. Few overshooting which is not bad. a very litte few undershooting. You did great job hitting the start dot and end. It's actually so gOod

3.Ghosted Planes

It's so perfect that you have very confident line. Most of them hitting start to end dots.

Your execution are Awesome

4.Tables of Ellipses

Overall you did great job being confident and great job almost all of the circle are snuggles each other its so clean and beautiful

5.Ellipses in Planes

Same as tables of ellipeses.

6.Funnels

Great work being confident

A few of the ellipse are not snugly against one another so be mindful of that. great Job

Great job on the minor axis (the line in the middle) it cut ellipses in 2 symetrical halves.

A few overshooting which is not a bad thing.

7.Plotted Perspective

Great work on this.

I like you have overlap boxes.

8.Rough Perspective

Some of the lines are bit wobbles but the front of box are great

You did great job Hitting the VP of some lines

And plotting the front of the boxes

9.Rotated Boxes

It's so clean i like it.

The gaps are consistent

All of the boxes are pointing towards Vp

A few wobbles but it's still good

You really did great Job on this thing.

This is a difficult homework but your work beautiful and so clean.

10.Organic Perspective

Your lines here are confident,

You did great making small boxes as they are far.

Some of the lines in the boxes are vanishing towards the vanishing point great job.

Most of it are parallel to each other.

This is a very difficult exercise at this stage, so it was to be expected. You will have a lot more opportunity to practice this during the 250 Box Challenge.

Again congratulations on finishing the lesson one you did great overall.

Hi Goodmoring/Goodnight i would like to say Congratulations on finishing the Lesson 1.

1.Superimposed Lines

Your lines are confident enough, a little of them have wobbles and archs make sure be confident and use your shoulder. The archs it can be fixed by trying to arch consciously to the opposite direction. Great job not fraying on the start. Clean execution on this one.

Make sure have warms ups.

2.Ghosted Lines

Most of it are confident as I said earlier and also overshooting which is not bad, most of them hitting from start to end. A bit wobble because you hesitated just make sure focus on confident line rather on hitting the end dot.

3.Ghosted Planes

Same as ghosted line but you improved by hitting the start . Your line are not wobbles as last time great Job on that

4.Tables of Ellipses

You drew your ellipses confidently. A bit deformed at times, but that will get better with more practice over time.

You have great accuracy on ellipse geeat Job.

5.Ellipses in Planes

Same as tables of ellipeses.

6.Funnels

Great work being confident

Great job on the minor axis (the line in the middle) it cut ellipses in 2 symetrical halves. The ellipse are snuggles to each that is great.

7.Plotted Perspective

Great work on this.

Greatjob on adding like weight on the boxes.

8.Rough Perspective

Some line of the are bit wobbles and you have repeating lines.

Most of them are hitting the Vp that Is great.

But in the the 2nd you fix your that is great.

9.Rotated Boxes

Lines are greats.

A few of the boxes are not rotating. But most of it are.

You have few repeated line No matter how off a line is, a you should never repeat it, they should kept the line as it if were correct and move on.

Some gaps are inconsistent but your execution are great on this one great Job.

10.Organic Perspective

Your lines here are confident

You did great making small boxes as they are far.

Your work are clean

Most of it are parallel to each other.

This is a very difficult exercise at this stage, so it was to be expected. You will have a lot more opportunity to practice this during the 250 Box Challenge.

Again congratulations on finishing the lesson one you did great overall you really put a effort on it great job.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE CRITIQUE I WILL KEEP YOUR THIS IN MIND

Great job being confident on lines and lines that going towards to VP some of them even hit the VP great job on that.

Some boxes box are slant make sure that front of the boxes are straight. Great job having parallel lines.