6:50 PM, Sunday March 30th 2025
Thank you! I tried to find the easiest thing to draw XD XD XD
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CyberKitty
Tamer of Beasts
The Indomitable (Spring 2025)
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cyberkitty's Sketchbook
12:16 PM, Saturday March 22nd 2025
Thank you for the critique!!! And separated thanks for the doodle, it's so cute!!!
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1:56 PM, Thursday March 13th 2025
Hello, dvoykin! Congratulations on finishing 250 boxes challenge!
You did well! Your boxes look good: they are diverse and their edges converge properly! The lines still wobble a little so I recommend to do more warm ups with Superimposed Lines (https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/superimposedlines) or any line exercise actually like Ghosted Lines or Ghosted Planes. I see you didn’t use hatching and lineweight which you aren’t obligated to do but it will be useful in the future lessons so I recommend to utilize it.
Good luck with Lesson 2!
Next Steps:
Lesson 2.
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1:38 PM, Thursday March 13th 2025
Hello! I think your submission has only one picture?
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1:35 PM, Thursday March 13th 2025
Hello, ChimmyR! Congratulations on finishing 250 boxes challenge!
You did well! Your boxes look good: they are diverse and their edges converge properly, your hatching is very good too. It looks like you didn’t use lineweight which you aren’t obligated to do but it will be useful in the future lessons so I recommend to utilize it.
Good luck with Lesson 2!Next Steps:
Lesson 2
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1:27 PM, Thursday March 13th 2025
Hello, PeluniFox! Congratulations on finishing 250 boxes challenge!
You did well! Your boxes look good: they are BIG, diverse and their edges converge properly. Your hatching is a little less perfect: don’t forget to draw the hatching lines the same way as all other free hand lines, with ghosting and confidence. It looks like you didn’t use lineweight which you aren’t obligated to do but it will be useful in the future lessons so I recommend to utilize it.
Good luck with Lesson 2!
Next Steps:
Lesson 2.
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1:13 PM, Thursday March 13th 2025
Hello, yucktogram_!
Congratulations on finishing 250 boxes challenge! You did GREAT! Lines of your boxes converge properly, they are smooth and confident. You hatching is a little less perfect: don’t forget to draw the hatching lines the same way as all other free hand lines, with ghosting and confidence. It looks like you didn’t use lineweight which you aren’t obligated to do but it will be useful in the future lessons so I recommend to utilize it.
Good luck with Lesson 2!
Next Steps:
Lesson 2.
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12:56 PM, Wednesday March 12th 2025
Hello, Aswathi!
Congratulations on finishing 250 boxes challenge! I love how diverse and clean your boxes are! You hatching is a little less perfect: don’t forget to draw the hatching lines the same way as all other free hand lines, with ghosting and confidence. You lines converge nicely, the inner corner is a little off but it will become better with practice and making it perfect without plotting perspective is almost impossible. It looks like you didn’t use lineweight which you aren’t obligated to do but it will be useful in the future lessons so I recommend to utilize it.
Good luck with Lesson 2!
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10:10 AM, Tuesday January 7th 2025
Thank you!!!
12:58 PM, Monday January 6th 2025
Hello, senj!
Thank you for the critique! I tried to pay attention to everything you said but it feels like the sausage method didn't work for me here https://imgur.com/a/tG0zafs. I think my kinda branches method gave better result in terms of making deers' legs straight and stiff which is close to the reference. Or I'm just not used to draw legs based on sausages?
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