Hello DIO! Thank you for such an amazing and detailed critique.

https://imgur.com/a/iO2b1zW here's the 3 pages.

I'm going to be honest I still feel insecure about some of the stuff you pointed out:

On the first page, i got so confused about what was going on on the insect's mouth, that it looked just like a shadow, because i basically fill it with black. It's very difficult to understand these regions where everything is very "crowded" with details.

Also, about line weight. I watched the video and understood about using it to identify overlaps, but when there's so much going on, like mutiple overlaps, i kinda thought that the form that is closer should have a "less subtle" line weight. Is this correct? I'll visit the lesson again as it is overhauled.

One more thing about the fur, I kinda understood that is better to draw little packs of fur than each individual strand, but on the bee the fur is very pointy and spiked. How to tackle that? I feel like I've stopped midway on the bee, because i thought i could mess up more.

I am sorry for writing so much. It's just because i'm still insecure about certains points. Again, thank you for the stupendous critique!