Thanks so much for a thoughtful critique! I really appreciate it. I've been trying my best to work on the line wobbles; I drink a lot of tea so I doubt that's helping. With the ghosted planes, I really should have read more carefully, so that's my bad. I was also a little confused on the organic perspective about whether I should draw through the boxes, since they weren't in the example homework, so I'll make sure to do that next time.

Thanks again!