Brilte

I wanted to say that I think you have confidence when you put the pen to the page, and it translates into strong and solid brushworks. I think that for the free-form boxes exercise, there isn't a solid enough transition between the box sizes. It ends up removing a lot of depth from the picture. I think the homework is really good and I'm goin gto mark it a complete, but I also think you should focus on layout and composition as you go forward in the lessons!

I think you have good strokes, especially since you haven't had the chance to use a felt pen. I think the earlier exercises, particularly the ellipse homeworks, are really well done. I would recommend to just add some extra strokes on the edge of the boxes (particular the silhouettes). This allows the boxes to stand out more, and it makes it easier to understand. The rotated boxes exercise is a bit hard to understand because all the lines have the same thickness. Try to go over the edges that point out of the paper more, and do not go over edges that are hidden or covered by other boxes. Otherwise I think the homework was well done.