3:49 PM, Saturday February 22nd 2020
I'm going to give you some feedback on your Lesson 1 homework. Ok, here I go:
Your superimposed lines look confident and are well drawn, there's an occasional wobble but that's really nitpicking at this point. And the ghosted lines and planes are good.
Your tables of ellipses are looking well. I see you are variating your ellipse orientation and size, keep that approach up.
The planes of ellipses: there are some really nice ones in there, cool. Sometimes the ellipse goes out of the bounds, keep an eye on that and you're golden.
The funnels exercise: you actually made two pages instead of one you overachiever, you! something you can keep in mind is that the ellipses contract the more they approach the middle of the funnel.
Now the last section: plotted perspective: well executed, I see you have added extra weight to the boxes. You can actually use a ruler for that during this exercise.
-rough perspective: There are a couple of thing I want to draw to your attention here:
- [you have plotted lines to the VP](https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/15/plottinglines) -the confident lines from your previous exercises have become wobbly, and there's a line missing in the middle box one the lower panel. -It would be easier to check if you use a different color to check your work (it doesn't matter if its a pencil) -also you submitted 1 page, but two pages are specified.
-rotated boxes: Once again the overachiever in you comes to the scene, three pages of rotated boxes. I'm only going to comment on the first one: you are using the box next to each to align them, good. they are not always rotating well but that's not an issue at this point. However you haven't drawn through all of the boxes (look at the ones in the corners). But I fully understand that this particular exercise can be a bit much.
- Im missing your 2 pages of the organic perspective exercise.
All in all, good work! Enough to go on to the next thing, but I would like to see your missing homework tough: 1 more page of rough perspective and your organic perspective exercise. You can reply to me with the link and I will check it. cheers.