Hi Gabrieleggers, thank you for your feedback. It helped me to figure where i should put my priority in the daily practice, appreciate !
Hi Paddle !
First, well done with your homeworks, overall it's great ! Your arrows's lines are fluid, your organics forms are consistent (just a little deviation of your ellipses sometimes but it's totally normal to not do it perfectly each time.) Your intersections are great, i got nothing to say about that, it seem that you got it at the end.
What i could say is :
-to pay attention to the chicken scratchs, you got tendencies to do it especially in your dissections & textures analysis. (That's regrettable because your dissections was very convincing this apart)
-to not simplify too much your texture in the process of creation of your gradient. (Look the forms of your rocks given by their cast shadows in your analysis, then the form of your rocks in your gradient)
Next Steps:
If you want to, you should retry one page of dissections confidently. Then after that, do one page of gradient with more explicit textures instead of rumpled paper and ice cream, like bark and a wall of bricks per exemple
Hello, thank you for your review.
Hi !
First of all, sorry for the delay of answer, i had informatic troubles for a couple time until now ! Then, thank you for your time and your review, it is very constructive.
I'd used a felt-liner pen at 0.5mm, not in very good health, i'd trouble to use it and dose my strength in the beginning... And still a bit actually. I think it's an amalgam of three, bad camera, artificials lights & bad utilisation of the felt-liner.
Revision link : https://imgur.com/a/f7rUBbY
No question, sir ! Thank for your encouragement !
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When starting on a project, I'll often open it up and start dragging reference images off the internet onto the board. When I'm done, I'll save out a '.pur' file, which embeds all the images. They can get pretty big, but are way more convenient than hauling around folders full of separate images.
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