Thank you for your thorough critique Laura,

I do have to say you quite well critiqued the parts where I had some kind of trouble. I think my biggest problem with smooth lines is when I draw from shoulder, the way I have the pen in hand, I always create friction from my bottom part of the pinkie to the table im drawing on. On many occasions this is not a problem because I can rotate the paper and have the underside of the pinkie on the paper (there it wont create friction as much) but when Im nearing a corner and cant rotate the paper in any better angle the lines get really bad even if I do manage to get it going from shoulder because of the friction. Do you have any advice here what I could try to do differently? Should I try to draw so that I dont use my pinkie as an anchor to the table or paper or something else?

Thank you for your thorough and well placed critique, I will reply with the improved homework.