Hi paperhat,

thank you so much for your detailed and complete critique!

I will follow your advice and incorporate smaller ellipses in my warmup as well as trying to think more about confidence and pivots.

(as for the rotated boxes, I hatched only half because while I was doing it I kind of felt it was covering up some of my mistakes, and in order to let the reviewer see all of my lines clearly I chose to stop halfway through)

Thank you again for your time, have a good day!