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5:40 AM, Friday May 10th 2024
Congrats on completing the lesson!
1.Superimposed Lines
Your lines are consistent and a really good job on prioritizing confident lines so not much wobbly lines.2.Ghosted Lines
Some lines are connected and they don't fray on both points. I suggest doing shorter ones first before making it longer so you can connect more of the dots and it'll get better later in time.3.Ghosted Planes/Ellipses
You strive that the lines meet in the middle while making sure the line quality consistent in the second page. I suggest you give it more time using the ghosting method doing the ghosted planes/ellipses and prioritize confidence in the shapes than having them meeting all the edges.4.Table of Ellipses
It's good that you managed to prioritize on line quality over hitting each panel borders.5.Funnels
Your attempt at gradual increase in both angle and degree as it goes out from the center is good, keep it up. Keep in mind that the minor axis (line in the middle) should cut the ellipses in symmetrical halves. 6.Plotted Perspective
You did well going through the lesson7.Rough Perspective
Most of the perspective estimates are close to the vanishing point so that's good. Width lines should be parallel to the horizon line and height lines perpendicular to the horizon line.8.Rotated Boxes
This lesson is expected to be a struggle but you did great going through despite the difficulty and well done.9.Organic Perspective
Your work on gradual sizing of each boxes are good. Your boxes are shallow and have diverging lines, instead of receding in perspective. Good work! This community member feels the lesson should be marked as complete. In order for the student to receive their completion badge, this critique will need 2 agreements from other members of the community.
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