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4:33 PM, Sunday February 12th 2023
Lines:
Your lines seem to have a bit of wobble, and you seem to falter near the end and try to swerve and reach your second point. This is incorrect, try drawing a smooth confident line with your arm. Accuracy will come after you manage this.
Ellipses:
In the table, the ellipses should be tangents to one another with no overlap, try working on this in the future. The ellipses in your planes and funnels seem hesitant and wobbly. Are you ghosting enough before putting them down or do you strugglewith using your arm as a pivot? Whichever reason, you should aim with a smooth curve much like the lines.
Boxes:
Your rotated boxes all converge to the central vanishing point, instead of converging further along the horizon line. Don't be too disheartened by this as it's something that others struggle with. Other than that, there's the same issue with the wobbly lines which will come with practice.
Other than that it's all good.
Next Steps:
Move onto the 250 box challenge! Good luck!
6:22 PM, Sunday February 12th 2023
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