Hi BreadyReady! I am Feldspar and I will be critiquing your work today. I hope you've been keeping up with your 50% rule and warmups while waiting! Lets begin!

Lines

• Superimposed Lines: I see no fraying on both sides or wobbling. Good job!

• Ghosted Lines: Confident lines, good work!

• Ghosted Planes: I see repeated lines! In DrawABox, you are not allowed to "fix" lines, you only have one shot at a line, and if you miss it, tough luck. This will force you to have a better planning phase, be mindful when ghosting, and will help your accuracy in the long run. Also I see some wobbliness here and there but there is nothing warmups cant fix. Remember dont rush and give time to every line. Don't forget confidence beats accurate!

Ellipses

• Tables of Ellipses: I notice some ellipses "float" on the page without any targets. Remember, ellipses need to have two borders that encase them, to check their accuracy. But i think it not a big deal as i believe it is about accuracy and will sort out itself with warmups, just keep it in mind. On the second page ellipses are evenly shaped and fit snugly against the borders. Solid work.

• Ellipses in Planes: I notice some of your ellipses are a bit wobbly. Remember not to be too focused on fitting them against all four borders. But there is nothing some practice with warmups can't fix. Again Confident but inaccurate line > Accurate but wobbly line.

• Funnels: I see some of ellipses are not aligned to the central minor axis line. Keep that in mind throughout your future warmups.

Boxes

• Plotted Perspective: I see most of the back vertical lines are not perpendicular. Again it's not a big deal as it is the result of all the little mistakes that accumulate as you work through core steps of this exercise. It means you have room to improve. Give yourself more time when lining up ruler.

• Rough Perspective: I see repeated lines again. Try to ghost more throughly when going towards the vanishing point, that may prove helpful. I also noticed your line confidence took a big hit.

• Rotated Boxes: You have a eye for rotations! Solid job. Although your gaps between boxes are not consistent especially on back faces resulting in guessing. But i think its about accuracy and will sort itself with warmups just keep it in mind.

• Organic Perspective: I see a lot of your edges parallel or diverge. Give you more time on the planning phase(during which they place their various points). I recommend reconsuming the material/ScyllaStew's videos before attempting Organic Boxes for warmup. But I believe with 250 Boxes Challenge instructions, you will understand and get better with organic boxes even more.