• Super Imposed Lines - lots of fraying going on, so I would suggest trying this exercise again as your warm-up next time. Get the shorter lines done to a good standard before moving on to the longer ones.

• Ghosted Lines - Good accuracy, but I'm seeing a lot of wobble. Try drawing from the elbow or shoulder, as well as increasing the speed of your stroke to get a straighter line. Would have been nice to see some more lines too, but overall not bad.

• Ghosted Planes - not great, looks like you were rushing. Lines are wobbly, not connecting to their points and overshooting. Apply more pressure on the pen when executing the line to improve its accuracy. Take your time aiming before laying down a fast, firm stroke. The same advice from before applies here too - start small and graduate to bigger planes once you get confident. Also put the planes closer to each other, as to fill up the whole page. If you're struggling, have a look at the official video and example homework.

• Ellipses on Ghosted Planes - While you are connecting the ellipses to the edges of the planes, they are super wobbly, so the piece looks rushed. Spend some more time on practicing ghosting and make sure to only go over each ellipse twice. Right now it looks like a big scribble.

• Tables of Ellipses - okay, looks like you improved quite a lot with this exercise. Nice effort, keep it up. Still looking a little off, but making progress for sure.

• Funnels - Same thing here, starting to notice more uniformity. Axis alignment looks almost perfect, good job.

• Plotted Perspective - This is optional, but consider using different line weights - thick lines for outer edges and thin ones for hatching, but that's just a minor nit-pick. Otherwise looking good.

• Rough Perspective - once again I see you are struggling with straight lines. I think you would agree that almost every line here looks wobbly. Perspective is all over the place. I think all of these issues come down to ghosting, so I'd suggest going back and rewatching the tutorial on how to get those smooth, straight lines.

• Rotated Boxes - your perspective actually looks better here than on the previous, easier exercise. My only gripe is with those lines. Otherwise, a solid effort.

• Organic Perspective - decent improvement on the perspective front, but still struggling with lines.

Overall, I would say that the only thing holding you back is your confidence and stroke speed. While my review was quite harsh and critical, notice that you're actually doing surprsingly well with every other skill covered in lesson one. Let's just get that line work dialed in and you'll be golden :)

• If you found my feedback helpful, I would appreciate a review of my Lesson 1, thanks. https://drawabox.com/community/submission/1U42P1IR