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7:31 PM, Friday April 12th 2024

1. Line extension

Line extension seems good enough overall

2. Divergence & Parallel lines

119 seems a bit parallel

3. Hatching

Hatching is a bit faint in some of the boxes

4. Lineweight

Overall lineweight is good enough

5. Wobbly & Repeating lines

Overall lines seem confident

6. Similar orientations

There's good ammount of variations

7. Inner corner

Most of the corners are maintained (despite some unevitable errors on the placement)

Overall you've grasped the concept & goal of the challenge.

Next Steps:

You can move onto lesson 2. Make sure to do these boxes as part of your routine exercise as well the lesson 1 stuff.

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11:02 PM, Saturday April 13th 2024

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